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-  <title id="title">Петля корректирующей передачи без выдуманного review</title>
-  <desc id="desc">Вопрос и временная граница проходят только при отсутствии review inputs и деклараций качества. Любое заявленное review, публикация, correction или outcome останавливает передачу.</desc>
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+  <title id="title">Петля эксплуатационной инструкции</title>
+  <desc id="desc">Симптом, scope и precondition ведут к одному обратимому действию, затем к проверке метрики и условному откату.</desc>
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